English CS2D Steam Store Page Translation

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21.10.17 08:32:33 pm
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CS2D é um jogo multijogador de tiro rápido visto de cima! [b]Gratuito[/b] para Windows, Linux & MacOS!

[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_topimg.png[/img]

Duas equipas tentam lutar entre si em partidas com muita ação. Têm vários tipos de missão como plantar a bomba, resgatar reféns, matar o V.I.P. , captura de bandeira, construção, zombies, deathmatch e team deathmatch. Também tens acesso a um grande arsenal de armas - o que incluí armas malucas como arma de portais, lasers, lança-mísseis e muito mais. Joga online, em LAN ou contra bots. Usa o editor de mapas embutido para criares os teus mapas em segundos ou escreve Lua scripts para modificares e expandires o jogo!

CS2D é [b]100% GRATUITO![/b] Sem custos. Sem qualquer tipo de pagamentos. Nada de pagar para ganhar. Nem penses em gastar dinheiro aqui.
É verdade! Não precisas de pagar nenhuma coisa para jogares este jogo! Nós só queremos que te divirtas!

[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_keyfeatures.png[/img]
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[*] Jogo online de tiro rápido (ou offline contra bots programados em Lua Script)
[*] Pistolas, caçadeiras, espingardas, espingardas com mira telescópica, submetralhadoras, granadas e muitas outras armas
[*] Vários modos de jogo: Clássico (Bomba, Reféns, VIP), Deahtmatch, Zombies, Construção...
[*] Fácil de mexer no editor de mapas com o sistema de entity/trigger
[*] Consola & Scripts de compra
[*] Modifica & Expande com Lua scripts (sim, nós também temos mods com chapéus engraçados!)
[*] Efeitos de luz dinâmicos e um modo visto de cima com elementos 3D parecido ao "GTA 2"
[*] Clientes e Servidores dedicados para Windows, Linux & MacOS
[*] Vários jogadores ativos por todo o mundo, milhares de mapas personalizados e scripts!
[*] ... e... esquecemos de mencionar que tudo isto é [b]GRATUITO SEM QUALQUER TIPO DE CUSTO[/b]?!
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[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_weapons.png[/img]
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[*] Vários tipos de armas de fogo e um escudo tático
[*] Proteções especiais (incluí uma proteção de médico e outra furtiva)
[*] Kits de médico & Ligaduras (recuperas a vida instantaneamente ao pegares)
[*] Dinheiro (ganha dinheiro dentro do jogo ao apanhares moedas no chão)
[*] Combate corpo-a-corpo: machete, chave inglesa, garra, motoserra
[*] "Granadas" especiais: flare, cocktail molotov, granada de gás, sinalizador de ataque aéreo, bola de neve
[*] Lançadores: lança-mísseis, lança-rockets, lança-granadas
[*] Minas: minas anti-pessoal, minas com laser
[*] E mais: lança-chamas, laser, arma de portais, ... - mais de 70 items diferentes ao total!
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[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_gamemodes.png[/img]
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[*] Modos Clássicos com DE, CS e AS mapas (bombas, reféns, VIPs)
[*] Deathmatch: fica louco e mata toda a gente!
[*] Team Deathmatch com captura de bandeira e mapas de dominação.
[*] Modo de construção: Constroí as tuas torres, paredes, teleportes, distribuidores e mais!
[*] Zombies! Tenta sobreviver ou sê um zombie e tenta infetar todos os sobreviventes!
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[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_battlehardened.png[/img]
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[*] CS2D está disponível há mais de uma década e foi melhorando com vários updates
[*] Completo e um jogo funcional! Sem acesso antecipado! Sem promesas falsas! O que vês é o que tens!
[*] A comunidade CS2D espetacular tem uma data de mapas e mods criados
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CS2D é um jogo multijogador de tiro rápido visto de cima. Têm vários tipos de modos, um editor de mapas embutido e muito mais.
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"Nothing to fear and nothing to doubt."
22.10.17 04:40:50 am
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@user DC: They translation great than me, can use their translate, @user 404_Monk feel like advertising, @user TobyInChina feel like decent.;)
@user 404_Monk: 还不错。。。我无话可言了,但感觉像在打广告,还有RPG火箭炮呢?
@user TobyInChina: 感觉好像我翻译的。。。没关系,但请纠正FPS这个点,这会误导他人,在外国,FPS是指First Person Shooter,不可能上帝视角/俯视又第一人称。。。还有请纠正传送枪枪(传送枪)。
I no making skin to CS2D anymore, "Desert Ranger Box" is my last skin pack, hope you enjoy.
22.10.17 09:50:44 am
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@user Armcoon: 已经更改,谢谢
22.10.17 11:07:34 am
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Thank you very much!

btw: This is a translation thread but writing normal conversations in other languages is still not allowed. Please use PM if you want to discuss translation details, thank you

Edit:
Now we have to Portuguese translations.. which one is better?
Also I would now go for user TobyInChina's Chinese translations. Are they okay or are the other ones better?

Also touching the tags means fixing them for me so please try to avoid changing them. Even adding spaces makes Steam go crazy already

Anyway I'm super grateful to have you guys around here! So many translations already! Thank you!
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22.10.17 12:29:14 pm
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@user DC: @user SlimPT:'s translation is the most accurate.
ignore my previous names
22.10.17 03:26:22 pm
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Brazilian Portuguese leave it to me, its different from the Portugal. I will make it today.
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22.10.17 09:17:29 pm
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Since there is no Bosnian/Croatian translation in game, do you want my Steam Store Page Translation? It's finished already, translated to Bosnian/Croatian, they are similar languages.
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22.10.17 10:23:33 pm
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@user cyka: Better to do Serbian/Croatian. Bosinian is just sublangauge of croatian..
22.10.17 10:41:14 pm
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@user LoaderFRA: There is few mistakes and some "weird" sentences in your version . ill correct them later .

I've edited half of it .. ill do the other half tomorrow !
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CS2D est un jeu de tir et d'action multi-joueurs en 2D [b]GRATUIT[/b] pour Windows, Linux & MacOS!

[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_topimg.png[/img]

Deux équipes s'affrontent sur differents scénario. Avec des missions variés comme le désamorçage de bombe, secours d'otage, assassinat de V.I.P, capture du drapeau, construction, zombies, match à mort et match à mort en équipe. Vous avez accès à un large choix d'armements - inclus aussi des équipements de cinglé comme le portal guns, fusil laser, RPG et bien plus encore. Jouez en ligne, en LAN ou avec les bots. Utiliser l'éditeurs de cartes pour créer votre propre cartes en quelques secondes ou en écrivant des scripts Lua pour changer et étendre votre jeu!

CS2D est [b]100% GRATUIT![/b] Aucun frais. Pas de paiement. Pas de pay to win . Aucune dépense.
C'est vrai!! Vous n'avez pas à payer quoi que ce soit pour jouer à ce jeu! Nous voulons juste que vous vous amusiez !

[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_keyfeatures.png[/img]
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[*] Rejoignez l'action en ligne (ou hors ligne avec des bots IA programmé en language LUA)
[*] Pistolets, fusils à pompe, Fusils d'assaut, Mitraillettes, grenades et beaucoup d'autres
[*] Plusieurs modes de jeu : Classique (Bombes, Otages, VIP), Match à mort, Zombies, Construction...
[*] Un editeur de cartes facile a utiliser avec le système "entité/cible"
[*] Console & script d'achat
[*] Modification et extension de scripts LUA (oui, on a aussi des mods avec des chapeaux amusants!)
[*] Effets dynamique d'éclaraige et un style de "GTA 2"- jeu 2D et possibilité de 3D
[*] Beaucoup de joueurs actifs partout au monde, Variétés de cartes et des scripts personnalisés!
[*] ... et aussi... avons-nous mentionné que tout cela est [b]TOTALEMENT GRATUIT[/b]?!
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[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_weapons.png[/img]
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[*] Beaucoup différentes armes et un bouclier tactique
[*] Armures spéciaux extraordinaires (incluant une armure médicale et une armure furtive)
[*] Kit de soins & bandages (restaure de la vie une fois ramassé)
[*] Pièces, billets, lingots d'or (en les ramassant, vous augmenterez votre porte-feuille)
[*] Combat rapproché: machette, clé à molette, griffe, tronçonneuse
[*] "Grenades" spécial: fusée éclairante, coktail molotov, grenade a gaz, frappe aérienne, boule de neige
[*] Lanceurs: RPG, lance missile, lance-grenade
[*] Mines: mine anti-personnel, mines laser
[*] Et encore: lance-flammes, fusil laser, portal gun, ... plus 70 autre objets différents au total!
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[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_gamemodes.png[/img]
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[*] Mode Classique avec les cartes DE, CS et AS (bombes, otages, VIPs)
[*] Match à mort: entrez dans l'action et tuer tous le monde!
[*] Match à mort par équipe: avec capture de drapeau et la domination de cartes
[*] Mode Construction: Construisez vos propres tourelles, murs, téléporteurs, distributeur et bien plus encore!
[*] Zombies! Essayer de survivre ou devenez un zombie en infectant tous les survivants!
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[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_battlehardened.png[/img]
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[*] CS2D a existé depuis des siècles et il a été amélioré avec de nombreuses mises à jour
[*] Un jeu complet et fonctionnel! Pas d'accès anticipé! Pas de fausses promesses! YOUPI!
[*] La formidable communauté CS2D a déjà créé des tonnes de cartes et de mods personnalisés
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CS2D est un jeu de tir 2D d'action multi-joueurs. Distingué avec plusieurs mode de jeu, un éditeurs de cartes et bien plus encore


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22.10.17 10:47:18 pm
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user DC has written:
Thank you very much!

btw: This is a translation thread but writing normal conversations in other languages is still not allowed. Please use PM if you want to discuss translation details, thank you

Edit:
Now we have to Portuguese translations.. which one is better?
Also I would now go for user TobyInChina's Chinese translations. Are they okay or are the other ones better?

Also touching the tags means fixing them for me so please try to avoid changing them. Even adding spaces makes Steam go crazy already

Anyway I'm super grateful to have you guys around here! So many translations already! Thank you!


You shouldn't trust a guy from argentina to translate for portuguese (also is a PT-BR one with many mistakes, wait for the mrc version).
"Nothing to fear and nothing to doubt."
22.10.17 11:25:19 pm
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Where's the official German translation to be the second source of reference?
Should the translation be inclined towards casual or the more or less formal speech (to represent an indie dev). There're always options with a slightly different connotation between words for a translation.

cs2d_keyfeatures text is okay, everything else lacks a direction. List of items? Cool, what to do with them? - No context provided. In comparison, the list of game modes is more interesting than the weapon list.
Custom gamemodes and the whole custom server theme is -under- not represented.
I'd also mention the tiny download size to motivate a random Steam user to quickly try out the game. Almost forgot to mention that the Win+Linux+MacOS line is completely unnecessary because Steam has supported platforms tags for this purpose.

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The Russian translation is very solid, but I'll still propose 2 or 3 small changes after your reply.
23.10.17 04:29:36 am
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23.10.17 06:58:26 am
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@user DC: Sorry abou other languages in this page. About@user TobyInChina's translation is better now, can use that.
@user TobyInChina: You're welcome.
I no making skin to CS2D anymore, "Desert Ranger Box" is my last skin pack, hope you enjoy.
23.10.17 10:26:43 pm
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@user VADemon: Thanks for the reply. I'm not planning to adjust the texts now as they are already translated.

My German translation is:
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CS2D ist ein actiongeladener top-down online Shooter! [b]KOSTENLOS[/b] für Windows, Linux & MacOS!

[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_topimg.png[/img]

In CS2D treten zwei Teams in spannenden Matches gegeneinander an. Mit einer großen Auswahl an Missionen wie Bombenlegung, Geiselrettung, Attentat, Capture the Flag, Bau-Modus, Zombies, Deathmatch und Team Deathmatch. Um dein Team zum Sieg bringen zu können, hast du Zugriff auf ein riesiges Waffenarsenal. Darin sind auch verrückte Waffen wie Portalkanonen, Laser, RPGs und vieles mehr enthalten. Spiele online, im LAN oder gegen Bots (KI-gesteuerte Computergegener). Nutze den eingebauten Karteneditor, um innerhalb von Sekunden eigene Welten zu schaffen oder schreibe Lua Skripte, um das Spiel zu verändern und zu erweitern!

CS2D ist [b]100% KOSTENLOS![/b] Keine Bezahlung. Kein "Pay to win". Keine Möglichkeit Geld auszugeben.
Ganz genau! Du musst und kannst NICHTS zahlen um CS2D zu spielen! Wir wollen einfach nur, dass du Spaß hast!

[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_keyfeatures.png[/img]
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[*] Actiongeladene Online Matches (oder offline gegen Lua-geskriptete KI Gegner)
[*] Pistolen, Schrotflinten, Gewehre, Scharfschützengewehre, Maschinenegewehre & -pistolen, Granaten und viele andere Waffen
[*] Viele Spiel-Mode: Klassisch (Bomben, Geiseln, VIP), Deathmatch, Zombies, Bauen...
[*] Einfach nutzbarer Karteneditor mit Entity und Auslöser-System
[*] Konsole & Kauf-Skripte
[*] Verändere & erweitere das Spiel mit Lua Skripten (ja, wir haben auch lustige Hut-Mods!)
[*] Dynamische Lichteffekte und "GTA 2"-artiger top-down 3D Modus
[*] Win, Linux & MacOS Spieleclients und dedizierter Server ohne Grafikausgabe
[*] Viele Spieler weltweit, unzählige Karten und Skripte von Spielern
[*] ... oh ... haben wir erwähnt, dass das alles völlig [b]KOSTENLOS[/b] ist?!
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[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_weapons.png[/img]
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[*] Viele verschiedene Waffen und ein Taktischer Schild
[*] Ausgefallene Rüstungen (inklusive einer Heilrüstung und einer "Stealth"-Rüstung)
[*] Medikits & Bandagen (Sofortige Heliung beim Aufsammeln)
[*] Geld Gegenstände (erhalte Cash beim Aufsammeln, um bessere Ausrüstung kaufen zu können)
[*] Nahkampf: Machete, Schraubenschlüssel, Zombie-Klaue, Kettensäge
[*] Spezielle "Granaten": Flare, Molotow-Cocktail, Gas-Granate, Luftschlag, Schneeball
[*] Launchers: RPG-Launcher, Raketenwerfer, Granatwerfer
[*] Minen: Personenmine, Lasermine
[*] Und mehr: Flammenwerfer, Laser, Portalkanone, ... - insgesamt über 70 verschiedene Gegenstände!
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[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_gamemodes.png[/img]
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[*] Klassischer Modus mit DE, CS und AS Karten (Bomben, Geiseln, VIPs)
[*] Deathmatch: Laufe einfach Amok und töte alle!
[*] Team Deathmatch mit Capture The Flag und Dominierung
[*] Bau-Modus: Baue Geschütztürme, Mauern, Teleporter, Ausrüstungsspender und vieles mehr!
[*] Zombies! Versuche zu überleben oder sei ein Zombie und stecke die Menschen an!
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[img]{STEAM_APP_IMAGE}/extras/cs2d_battlehardened.png[/img]
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[*] CS2D gibt es schon seit über einer Dekade und es wurde kontinuierlich verbessert und erweitert
[*] Ein komplettes und funktionierendes Spiel! Kein Early Access! Keine falschen Versprechen! WYSIWYG!
[*] Die geniale CS2D Community hat bereits Tonnen von Karten und Mods erstellt!
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CS2D ist ein kostenloser, actiongeladener top-down online Shooter. Es bietet viele verschiedene Spielmodi, einen integrierten Karteneditor und vieles mehr!


It's not necessary to be as close as possible to the original English version. Slight changes are okay as long as the text still conveys the same message and sounds okay.

In the meantime Valve reviewed the CS2D Steam page and I put it online. I can still edit it and also add more languages.
http://store.steampowered.com/app/666220/CS2D/
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23.10.17 10:44:00 pm
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The European Portuguese translation currently on the Steam page is pretty good! There's a few things that could be further translated like "scope" which is "mira" and "entitys" should be 'entities' (we have the word 'entidades' but I doubt its meaning is suitable for the context). Just minor things which don't make that much of a difference anyway.
23.10.17 11:13:35 pm
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user Medeiros has written:
The European Portuguese translation currently on the Steam page is pretty good! There's a few things that could be further translated like "scope" which is "mira" and "entitys" should be 'entities' (we have the word 'entidades' but I doubt its meaning is suitable for the context). Just minor things which don't make that much of a difference anyway.


Ups my bad , dc if you don't mind update please:

http://unrealsoftware.de/forum_posts.php?post=416760&start=29


@user Medeiros: About the "entidades" doesn't make much sense, this is not pt-br they like to translate everything even the small things which is not good and sounds lame when you read or talk.
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"Nothing to fear and nothing to doubt."
23.10.17 11:56:08 pm
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I made some minor changes in the original post, feel free to update on steam, @user DC: .

http://unrealsoftware.de/forum_posts.php?post=416760&start=0#post416786
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24.10.17 12:51:34 am
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Spoiler >


Why tha fuck u repeat "gorgonzola" 14 times? kspokpskops
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24.10.17 03:23:57 am
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Hungarian version updated @user DC:

Just fixed some mistype, now everything is awesome and grammar error free.

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24.10.17 03:26:26 am
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@user DC: DC, I found a wrong thing here.(I miss check here before, sorry)
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@user 4Vendetta: What are you talking about. What thing repeat 14 times? I don't see that...
I no making skin to CS2D anymore, "Desert Ranger Box" is my last skin pack, hope you enjoy.
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