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RedPillow
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So, I`ll start Futuristic story and everyone of you should write more of it.
Please mark your continual of story with "Chapter #_:".
To keep this clean and easier to continue.

Rules:

Forum-basic-rules.
Don`t write just a few lines.
Don`t write anything completely retard.
If someone has wrote something retard => skip it, and continue from last non-retard continual-of-story.

Chapter #1:

∗Story about galactic master-robber.∗

The story starts on the year 2400 at the Expiros-Nebula.
A master-robber called Dax Leiner is waiting in prison to get free.
Humans of eart are really scared these day - For a reason, earth has left behind on technology and defences.

Earth has no shields, just a few laser-cannons bought from Interius-planet...not much at all...
Dax Leiner is 28 year-old Miner-miner who was civial once, like everyone else.
Dax Leiner family died in huge spacecraft-accident back in year 2388 and Dax hasn`t still got over with it.

*PLEASE CONTINUE FROM HERE AS YOU WISH*
*BUT PLEASE ONT THAT WE DON`T WANT MAGIC- *
*PIXIES,HOOKERS OR ANYTHING CRAP LIKE THAT.*
* SO KEEP IT AWAY*

Thanks -Monkeyz.

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So to compensate for his lost, he is always drowning out his sorrows with alcohol. He make a great salary from his job and wastes about a forth of it on his drinking habit.
He doesn't care what others think of him. He feels like a lost soul in this world. But one day he got an offer of a better job. Still day labour but better! A rep from the planet Dresis-34 wanted him to work as a heavy machine worker. Apparently some one sent his resume to the rep. He though some one was looking out for him. He didn't care! He was excited about his new job! more money to spend on his beverages...

[{(I voted yes :3)}]

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a few days before Dax was offered this new job , in the Pegasus system a mysterious pyramid shaped starship scanned and then attacked a human ship named the Iron Barrel. The human ship is almost defenseless, its lasers doing very little damage to the alien ships shields, and most of its missiles were destroyed long before they were able to impact with the ship. Just as it was about to finish off the human ship, it jumped into hyperspace, leaving the heavy damaged ship to land on a nearby planet. The Iron Barrels crew informed Earth's government about this encounter, and found out the ship was headed towards earth. Meanwhile back to Dax was at going to Dresis-34 to have his interview with the rep. What he didnt know was he was to work on machinery on a starship. this same starship was to join others in intercepting the alien ship...

Btw is it ok if your story has elements from a TV show?

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Chapter 2.

Dax is on his way to Dresis-34 When the captain of the Transport-Frigate he is on announces battle stations of all crew and for all passengers to take cover in the air tight panic rooms (they had air filters). Dax took the advice made head way for one of the panic rooms. He was with a newly-wed couple and vacationers. After all, Dresis-34 was known for it's beautiful scenery and tourist's sites. The captain noticed around 3 small Unidentified ships. although the ship is equipped with weapons, being a frigate turned transport. But then again most if not all of the ships now-a-days have weapons, what with the raiders and all. Non the less, the captain was inexperienced and worried about his cargo. Wow a captain that cares more for his people than his self. Almost as soon as the ships started heading towards the captain they broke off and headed to the north-north-east. Uncharted territory... They must have scanned his ship and saw how equipped it was. A close call. To close. He hoped they didn't return in numbers. The captain then recalled all passengers to their cabins. Dax was relived to hear the "all clear" message from the captain. None of the passengers were phased by the event what with this happening often... except of course, Dax...

@SG MC I think we should stay original. I mean look at that ^^. Thats all off the top of my head. Just stay original. BTW: Isn't what i wrote awesome : D

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Dax and other passengers still managed to get to Dresis-34 in one piece.
When they were getting space-taxi out from rocket-landing zone Dax noticed something...
The president of Dresis-34 stepped in to his escape-shuttle ready to fly to the safehouse.
Dax decided to keep this secret - This galaxy is not safe anymore...
Weeks passed till wednesday 8.23.2400.
Dax suffered long for mysterious headache till he finally managed to get to doctor.
Doctor had no good news, Dax has cancer on his left lung - Spreading towards to his vital areas like heart.
Dax didn`t take it that hard, although he`s parents were all dead, he had no friends and all - so he thought that there is no point in living alone.
Dax refused to go in any threatments and was on his way to Zyslan-9.

@ All of you, KEEP IT COMING, LOOKS NICE.
I should make a blog or something and put this story to there - with all it`s continuals when you write em =D

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ll- this is stating to for me like star treck -ll
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Matsu-Kiri
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spartan029 has written
Chapter 2.


@SG MC I think we should stay original. I mean look at that ^^. Thats all off the top of my head. Just stay original. BTW: Isn't what i wrote awesome : D


i should have said what i copied, i took the pyrimid ship from stargate, but thats all, so its not really too much plaserized.
besides i like storys with huge space battles and explosions XD. what you think Jonzku? Is my part still in the story :)?

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I think we can leave your part in but thanks to it we now have a galactic space battle on our hands. Cause now "The Order"(This is what we call humanity now, or at least the people that want to be a part of it) has another enemy. But from now on no more from shows, games etc...

oh and SG MC, his name is no longer jonzku, its Monkeyz

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Dax is so upset with his loss that he crys in the feedle pos.
for 3 hours then his eyes bleed from crying so long. then he shoots him self.so he gets to heaven (if you beleive that kinda thing)
god:hello
dax:uhmm who the hell are you?!?
god:what?! im god dont you read the bible you sinner
dax: oh your god yeah right
god: yes i am i could kill you for mocking me
dax: im already dead what are going to do know? god!
god:angle bring book of lambs(the book that god has to tell who is saved)now let me see dax...
dax: your just reading a stupid book
god: uhmm dont see it
dax:see wha...
dax: ah sh!t im on fire
satan: silence sinner and prepare for an eternity of torture muhahahaha
dax:oh shut the f**k up
dax:, (waking up from dream)wha..what just happend
looks out of spaceship window and then the ship crashes then story repeats it self from heaven part up to hell part.

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#Chapter Four#
          #Lost Contact#

Well, Ships of Earth were at the ready, although unequiped with the levels of technology the attackers seemed to have. The millitary sent them on a "Expanding circle patrol" a large circle of ships that slowly expand to cover biger radii, like ripples in a pond. Zyslan-9. An area inhabited by naturaly hostile creatures, but not space farers. The reason Dax was on the ship was only for maintnence, but of course you need to be scared. The reason for this trip is because on the hottest, innermost planet there is a steel like pyramid- with jean-like stitches down the corners. Connections can be made here, but on a planet over 10,000 degrees (C or F, dosen't really matter), anything that remains is amazing. Back at Earth, communications with the patrol, suddenly stopped, but every ship, no matter where it was, was lost. Gone. Dissapeared. Non existent. Dax was holding a communications line with Earth, where suddenly it seemed to disappear too. A warning was sent, but there was nothing to do in a practicly unarmed transport. So, they moved to the outermost planet to slowly establish a base.
          #Chapter 5#
      #Death is Inevitable#

A month later a strange message reached the ship. It was on the oldest computer, it read "Death is Inevitable" over and over again. Dax pulled the plug, but the computer just kept sending the same words. Dax was on a starbase orbiting the planet. A standered syntrifical drive was aboard the ship, spinning it each part to simulate gravity. It malfunctioned, and then stopped. Weightlessness was felt for about a minute, and then 1G.2G.3G.5G.7G.10G. everyone was passed out. When Dax woke up, he was in the control room. The windsheilds only were showing blackness. Starless, Planetless Pitch Blackness. The elevator was wrecked, the airlock wasn't open. Cameras showing other rooms broken. He was alone now.

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(Still Chapter 5)

Dax noticed he had a holstered .45 Colt pistol (a weapon almost impossible to find now-a-days). He wondered how he got into the bridge and how the hell did he has this old ass gun. Those questions would have to wait. He rushed to the coms table and found he needed a pass word to activate it. "Damn!" he thought. He needed to find the Captain's quarters. He knew he could find it there. He went to the captain's chair and started up the console. It wrote:

Good afternoon, Captain Zimmerman. Do you have a command?
Enter command: >/_

Dax typed "status". The console then showed a top down view of the ship and and the damaged parts of the ship. There was a lot of damage. He then typed "life signs" and got a reading of one red dot in the bridge witch was him, then got 5 dots in the mess hall. Survivors! He needed to get to them. He then went to the PA system and a Ship wide announcement of "Attention Crew of this ship. I am not your captain but i am in the bridge. I am unsure of how to navigate the ship can you please come to the bridge, Thank you." After the call he want back to console and saw those 5 dots making there way out of the mess hall. "I hope there friendly", he said to himself...
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(Chapter 6) Ghosts in space

Dax was waiting for the 5 "survivors" to get to the bridge, when he saw on one of the cameras what they really were. 5 huge creatures, each nearly 3 meters tall, they were covered in a thick armor which was almost completely black and 2 large blue visors covered their eyes. "Oh great, i am so screwed, 5 aliens and i dont even have a weapon that looks like it could kill them" Dax hid behind a computer console and waited for the aliens to come in. After a few minutes he gets up and looks at the computer. It reads 1 life sign on the ship, and that was his. Dax thought maybe he was going insane or something. Finally he decided to go investigate what happened on the ship. Just as he opened the door to leave the bridge...

oh yea,monkeyz do you think we should come up with like names for each chapter? I'm doing it.
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