English Horror_Kosar by NikiCheL icon

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19.06.18 11:35:07 am
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NikiCheL
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Hello all.

I was thinking, why not make a horror story map?
And did.
This map I did a long time.
Well, let's get down to business! You can use this card only without saying that you made it. I worked! I hope you understand me well. now download and play!
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x This file has been reviewed and declined by Yates (04.07.18 04:40:19 pm)
The quality of the file is too low! Please invest more time and only upload stuff which is actually good. Do not upload your first "5 minute"-attempts. Sorry, but nobody wants to see and download stuff like that!

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01.07.18 06:57:52 am
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NikiCheL
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@user Obito Uchiwa: Thanks for the idea
30.06.18 11:32:15 pm
like I like it!
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Obito Uchiwa
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I like your concept etc.. as all guys told you, you should work more on the map, it can take you time. If you want continu the map or if you won't np it's your buisness.. but you tried. All I've got to tell you is to make the map more darker as an horror game, where we can use only the cs2d "FlashLight" for move, and make the map more bigger and more scariest,

I'll give you a like for tried and for encourage you to keep working on it cause you can make it more better

-playø
25.06.18 06:09:34 am
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@user Rainoth: Thanks, I understood, but if you want me to improve it, it's gonna take a long time.
25.06.18 02:01:11 am
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Cure Pikachu
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What user Rainoth said really. Maybe you should learn from this guy - you are basically doing what he did.
25.06.18 01:55:34 am
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Rainoth
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Hey, user NikiCheL. I understand that you worked long and hard to make your idea for a map into success but sometimes it just doesn't work out. When others tell you what is wrong, try to fix it. We're not being agressive with our comments or anything, we just want you to improve.

All files need to have a certain level of quality and making excuses isn't going to improve their quality. One of the reviewers will probably decline your file for that reason but don't get upset - it just means you need to work a bit harder and for that, listening to the criticisms of others will help you go a long way.

As for my advice: Try to find a better tileset and keep a more consistent theme throughout your map. Also, try to create less space to walk. Small but tightly packed maps work out wonderfully more than you'd expect.

Good luck
24.06.18 10:08:51 pm
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@user Masea: indisputable logic from that guy
24.06.18 08:05:22 pm
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@user Masea: thanks but no.
24.06.18 07:08:07 pm
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@user NikiCheL: Thanks for a quick tip, I truly didn't know about that. I mean, seriously, I could even give you a like for that.

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24.06.18 02:31:27 pm
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@user Masea:

who wants to play he plays, and who doesn't, he does not play
24.06.18 02:14:48 pm
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user NikiCheL has written:
If you don't like it don't play
Then nobody would play it regardless. And so, if nobody would play it, why you even uploaded it here?!
24.06.18 01:32:01 pm
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@user danilqra: you normal?
24.06.18 12:51:56 pm
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@user crazy junkman Wolfgang: it's just a little kid. When he grows up, he will understand.
24.06.18 09:07:34 am
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@user NikiCheL: Dont get me wrong bud, i was giving you constructive criticism in hope you would improve yourself because i genuinely like this kind of maps.
24.06.18 08:07:01 am
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@user crazy junkman Wolfgang:

If you don't like it don't play
22.06.18 05:15:04 pm
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I like the fact that you tried to make this kind of map, but the map itself is anoying. The player deaths are random, i mean there are no monsters or something just death (teamgate activated on looped delays), and if we (as players) dont escape soon enough, we get stuck on spawn, and while i figure that out that i was stuck and no means of escape except restarting the round, everything became boring.

Nice try, but redesign map, add details, add some story then reupload.
21.06.18 10:43:41 am
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Thank you.

Molchi debil
21.06.18 10:35:50 am
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TrADmeN
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Good map

Govno.
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