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20.11.16 11:02:54 am
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mimafan
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de_burr - is a map of the genre of Bomb Defuse, and also the first that I upload here.

I made it with tiles and gfx by user Jite.

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Please don't write comments like "shit", without giving any criticism.
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ok This file has been reviewed and approved by Rainoth (23.11.16 12:57:04 am)

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02.01.17 09:43:26 pm
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krITik
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Good map, this returns 2007
30.12.16 07:45:23 pm
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Pehlivan
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shit


just kidding, as @user Time: mentioned, the trainsitions doesnt really look good. but nonetheless, the map looks overall good
23.11.16 11:55:09 pm
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Guitorres - trz
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its a good map, would certainly have won 5/5 if it was posted back in 2010, when production and demand were simpler.. you just need to be careful with the spaces on the map, it's clearly too tight, making it easier to use shotguns instead automatic ones.
23.11.16 06:34:23 pm
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mimafan
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@user Rainoth: Eh... you're right.
23.11.16 06:27:04 pm
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Rainoth
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You should go for fixing what people pointed out
23.11.16 04:10:29 pm
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mimafan
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@user Rainoth: Thanks! Now I go for cake and champagne!
23.11.16 05:09:34 am
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Time
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The rough transition to areas of shade is extremely unpleasant to the eye. So much that your map would look better without them.
23.11.16 01:35:34 am
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Scott
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Nice map bro
23.11.16 12:56:51 am
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Rainoth
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I'll approve of it since it's definitely not bad.
With that said, some tiles are missing shading so you should re-evaluate which tiles you want to use for what.
22.11.16 07:31:53 pm
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mimafan
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Hey, fellow reviewers!
You can reviewe with my map?
Or I kill you (no)
22.11.16 02:41:29 pm
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Masea
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@user mimafan: If there were some empty places that has been made decently, then presumably I could. Providing even producer of the map don't know where to place those bombsites, then of course we cannot.
21.11.16 05:11:55 pm
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mimafan
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@user Masea,@user BlueBros: You can specify the place where it is most apt to put bombspot?
21.11.16 04:06:42 pm
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@user HOLOgraphicSky: Change your perspective as soon as posibble. We can't make similar maps as popular ones just because of they are popular in CS2D. Otherwise, we'll start to see only nasty minecraft maps.

Probably the worst map which bombsites has been added to wrong places, isn't it? Also, exits of the rooms looks really unrealistic and poor, try to add several cs2d entity env_lightstripe s there. Furthermore, you tried to insert details as using only boxes, what's up with some grasses or cars?
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21.11.16 03:28:26 pm
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BlueBros
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Good but,
-Bombsite A does not have any campspot.
-T spawn is too near at bombsite A.

Are this map fast paced?

And sorry for complain.
21.11.16 10:07:22 am
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mimafan
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Ok. I change map. Hope you like it!
20.11.16 10:31:03 pm
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Jite
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user HOLOgraphicSky is wrong, half of the current most active servers are servers where deathmatch maps are played on.
@user mimafan: It is kinda funny to see that you've used the tiles in that way that I didn't meant that they are used. However it is looking good from the realation.
Since I'm checking this right now on a PC where I am not playing cs2d, I'd like to ask you for a Mapexport where you've marked the spawns areas, from Counterterrorists as from Terrorists. Then it's easier to judge it. Furthermore your shadows seem to be used wrong, I am not sure right now whether they are light engine or used over a black sprite. However they are looking cutted.
20.11.16 10:01:11 pm
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HOLOgraphicSky
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Useless map, no one plays de_ mode and it small and simple. But I put a Like for the effort. I advise you to do cooperative maps (for example in minecraft style, now it popular cause I see minecraft servers very often).
20.11.16 04:34:32 pm
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mimafan
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Okay. Thanks for the reply.

EDIT: Give me two days.
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20.11.16 04:16:10 pm
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ZxC
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Just edit the file by replacing the old map version with the newest one, update the description with changes you've made and change the screenshots as well. It's not necessary to remove the file.
20.11.16 12:22:09 pm
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mimafan
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@user ZxC: Well... I will be corrected soon! Thank you for your review.

EDIT: Now i can to delete this map? I upload other version soon!
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